Plan
Title:the hidden treasure of the northlands.
Text Type: Narrative.
Phrases: “Hm hm hm hm, h h hmmm.(translated.) I need a helmet, here one is”
“Ahh! Shark!!”
“I’m running out of air!”
planning: hop into water and find helmet > get attacked by sharks > find speargun and treasure > run out of air and hop out of the water.
Splash!I dived into a hole of water and started swimming. after a while of swimming I said to myself, “Hm hm hm hm, h h hmmm.(translated.) I need a helmet, here one is” I then started swimming around glad that I found a helmet.
“Phew. All this swimming is making me hungry…for treasure!”I turned to see a shadow heading towards me “what…is that?” I found to my surprise it was a shark. “Ahh! Shark!!”
I was wrong. It was a goldfish…until I looked behind the goldfish. “Ahh! Shark!!” “I mean…Title:the hidden treasure of the northlands.
Text Type: Narrative.
Phrases: “Hm hm hm hm, h h hmmm.(translated.) I need a helmet, here one is”
“Ahh! Shark!!”
“I’m running out of air!”
planning: hop into water and find helmet > get attacked by sharks > find speargun and treasure > run out of air and hop out of the water.
The hidden treasure of the Northlands
Intro
Hi I’m Mike and i’m 13 .
I have set off to find the treasure of the Northlands and this is the spot to be.
Splash!I dived into a hole of water and started swimming. after a while of swimming I said to myself, “Hm hm hm hm, h h hmmm.(translated.) I need a helmet, here one is” I then started swimming around glad that I found a helmet.
“Phew. All this swimming is making me hungry…for treasure!”I turned to see a shadow heading towards me “what…is that?” I found to my surprise it was a shark. “Ahh! Shark!!”
I was wrong. It was a goldfish…until I looked behind the goldfish. “Ahh! Shark!!” “I mean…Ahh! Sharks!!” I swam a quick as I could.
after a little while of swimming and dodging the sharks attacks I found a speargun. “Ha! Who’s the scaredy cat now, ha?” The sharks then swam away with guilt. “O.k. Now lets find this treasure and get out of here ‘cause i’m low on air.” After a while of swimming I finally found the lost treasure of the northlands. “Woah! Look at this place. It’s an underwater city!”
“Wait. I don’t get it. Where is the treasure?” Then a merman swam up to me and said, “This is the treasure.” “So I nearly got killed by sharks to get down here.” I replied. “Yeah. Pretty much.”
I was nearly out of air and when told him I had to get back he said, “Here is my number. Call if you need me.”
Outro
I went back to my nice and cosy apartment. until next time.
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